各位好,我是万年潜水的由纪!这次好不容易腾出时间上岸,就来教各位如何利用英文对白提高小说逼格。(机智地水了一贴)
我是一个简单直白的人,所以直接上干货吧。
取自《战斗吧!不可思议的孩子们》片段 第二卷 芙蕾娅夺回作战 章节:芙蕾娅 陨落
以下是原版。
随着“轰隆”的一声,头顶上的运输机被随即赶来的导弹击中,像是一个正在燃烧着的巨大火球一样往下坠落,同时周围还散落着数不清的碎片和摇曳着火光的铁屑。
“喂!醒醒啊,把手给我!”
女孩摇摇头,紧紧抱着降落伞背包的双手松开,降落伞背包迎着由纪“飞”去,她抓住了背包。
由纪在上,而女孩在她的下方。由纪将降落伞穿好,看准女孩的方向,然后立刻调整好姿态,收紧双臂和双腿,头部朝下,尽可能地减少与空气的摩擦,整个人以接近每秒百米的速度笔直而下。
为了救回那个女孩,她已经是不顾一切了。
由纪看到女孩的嘴巴一张一合,像是在说着什么,但是周围都充斥着空气因为高速摩擦碰撞而发出的呼呼声,她根本就什么都听不见。
“你在说什么?!”
在空中的这几十秒,感觉像是十几年一样漫长。
近在眼前!她的左手拼命向前伸着,终于就要握住女孩向她伸来的双手了,虽然还没有完全触碰到,但是在那一瞬间,她几乎能在感觉到女孩指尖上的冰凉气息,那种感觉分明就是那么的真实。
“打开,降落伞,立刻。”
由纪不知从哪里听到了这句话,不,自己分明什么也没有听到,这声音就仿佛是在脑中凭空出现一样。
但是她什么也没有在想,就像是这阵声音就这么直直地传入了脑中一般。
她右手下意识打开了后背降落伞,转而又突然一愣。
她已经不可能再救回那个女孩了,看着女孩的最后一眼所见到的,是女孩嘴角露出的微笑。
十分从容,没有遗憾,无所畏惧,像是慷慨地迎接着自己的死亡一般。
就只是那样的微笑。
由纪眼睁睁地看着眼前的女孩就这样离自己远去,笔直地朝着地面坠落,慢慢地变成了一个小点,最后消失了。
“该死的!”
她懊悔地对自己埋怨道。
经过一开始的几乎要扯断肩膀的拉力的撕扯,身体已经由极速坠落变成了像是蒲公英一样,缓缓地迎风摇摆而下。
都结束了吗?
“真是千钧一发啊,由纪小姐。如果不是及时拉开了降落伞,距离地面这么近的高度,哪怕再拖一秒没有开伞,你就要摔成碎片了。”
无线电传来“天使”的飞行员用十分庆幸的问候。
由纪心中被复杂的情感充斥着,不知该做何感想。
她闭上双眼,长舒了一口气,只留下一声叹息。
“芙蕾娅……”
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然后这里是英文台词版。
随着“轰隆”的一声,头顶上的运输机被随即赶来的导弹击中,像是一个正在燃烧着的巨大火球一样往下坠落,同时周围还散落着数不清的碎片和摇曳着火光的铁屑。
“Hey!Wake up!give me your hand!”
女孩摇摇头,紧紧抱着降落伞背包的双手松开,降落伞背包迎着由纪“飞”去,她抓住了背包。
由纪在上,而女孩在她的下方。由纪将降落伞穿好,看准女孩的方向,然后立刻调整好姿态,收紧双臂和双腿,头部朝下,尽可能地减少与空气的摩擦,整个人以接近每秒百米的速度笔直而下。
为了救回那个女孩,她已经是不顾一切了。
由纪看到女孩的嘴巴一张一合,像是在说着什么,但是周围都充斥着空气因为高速摩擦碰撞而发出的呼呼声,她根本就什么都听不见。
“What did you say?!”
在空中的这几十秒,感觉像是十几年一样漫长。
近在眼前!她的左手拼命向前伸着,终于就要握住女孩向她伸来的双手了,虽然还没有完全触碰到,但是在那一瞬间,她几乎能在感觉到女孩指尖上的冰凉气息,那种感觉分明就是那么的真实。
“Open,the Parachute,now.”
由纪不知从哪里听到了这句话,不,自己分明什么也没有听到,这声音就仿佛是在脑中凭空出现一样。
但是她什么也没有在想,就像是这阵声音就这么直直地传入了脑中一般。
她右手下意识打开了后背降落伞,转而又突然一愣。
她已经不可能再救回那个女孩了,看着女孩的最后一眼所见到的,是女孩嘴角露出的微笑。
十分从容,没有遗憾,无所畏惧,像是慷慨地迎接着自己的死亡一般。
就只是那样的微笑。
由纪眼睁睁地看着眼前的女孩就这样离自己远去,笔直地朝着地面坠落,慢慢地变成了一个小点,最后消失了。
“God damn it!”
她懊悔地对自己埋怨道。
经过一开始的几乎要扯断肩膀的拉力的撕扯,身体已经由极速坠落变成了像是蒲公英一样,缓缓地迎风摇摆而下。
都结束了吗?
“So danderous,Miss Yuki.If you were not open the Parachute in time,as you were so close to ground,your would not be in a piece anymore even one more second it took.”
无线电传来“天使”的飞行员用十分庆幸的问候。
由纪心中被复杂的情感充斥着,不知该做何感想。
她闭上双眼,长舒了一口气,只留下一声叹息。
“Freyja...”
瞬间一股浓浓的美式大片既视感啊有木有!
然后这里是传送门《战斗吧!不可思议的孩子们》只要用鼠标轻轻点一下就能进去啦。
点进去,别犹豫!不要问,使劲点!点了你不吃亏,点了你不上当!只要把鼠标移动到上面,深吸一口气,然后果断按下左键!你能行的!相信自己,一击必中!你绝对能做到!
“I have to tell all of my people and people around the world that the
Legion,the Legion of Tide without declaring last night。I think this of a
principal that the evil power breaks the law of the civilized society by
violence。(我不得不告诉我的民众以及世界各处的民众,天央帝国和安鸣帝国的联合舰队不宣而战,袭击了我们的包括第六军团潮汐军团在内的海军。我将此视作邪恶势力以暴力破坏文明社会的信条。)”
棠继景和封廉清正坐在收音机前,仔细听着这一段广播演讲。治瑞米七世的声音低沉而威严,沉重但不悲伤。
明净的玻璃窗外,是一片淡淡的铅蓝色的天空,比左氏的代表色淡了些许。似乎像是左家人已经统治了天空一样。不过这个颜色也确实很搭配这篇演讲。
order all the citizens from the E。M。S and Andiling that are on the territory of
Lanstiwill move abroad in 24 hours。Or the S。E。G。L will not protect their
lives,their property,and their liberty。I send this message to the Light of
Goddess,the E。A。A。,Miyamo,Euvo,and also the E。M。S。 and Andiling,and all the
country around the world,to my people in the country and abroad:I,Zarimy Motai
Pospand,the descendant of the Ocean God,Bomo,the lord of the Lanstiwill and
Higolor,the ruler of the Light Ocean,the leader of the people of Lanstiwill,the
emperor of sea,king Zarimy the seventh of the empire of Lanstiwill,stands for
the Great Empire of Lanstiwill and the people of Lanstiwill makes this
announcement:The Great Lanstiwill and the E。M。S。,Andiling are at war,formally
from now on。We will fight to the end until those two countries that are against
us announce an unconditional surrender。Any countries’ any support for those two
countries will be considered as against us,and we will declare a war。At
the same time,We call all the forces give us support,give support to another
“For the second time in the lives of most of us that we are at
war。However,there will be more danger and difficulties in this war。the weapons
will be no longer just swords,firearms,battleships,and flying machines。Machines
that work for killing and battle will be shown to the world。The battlefield
will be not limited on the sea,or the land,or the sky。We’ll fight with our
bodies as well as our minds。Plunderers have torn off their rough disguises,their
plumages,in the name of the King God,in the name of the middle under the sky,openly
challenge the Ocean God and the order of the world。Therefore,I call for
everyone waves your flag,accept the baptism with blood and fire,and rebirth。May
the Ocean God,Bomo,and the Human God,Gumor,always be with you。
后来发现我英语水平也不怎么好……
how about this?
by google
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With the "bang" bang, transport overhead is immediately rushed to the missile hit, was burning like a huge fireball falling down, around the same time is also littered with debris and countless swaying firelight iron filings.
"Hey! Wake up, ah, give me your hand!"
Girl shook her head, tightly holding hands backpack parachute release, parachute backpack facing discipline "fly" by going, she grabbed the backpack.
Yuki on, but the girl in her bottom. Yuki put on the parachute, spotted the direction of the girl, and then adjust once good posture, tightening his arms and legs, head down, to minimize friction with the air, the people close to one hundred meters per secondspeed straight down.
In order to save the girl, she is desperate.
Yuki saw one of a girl's mouth, as if saying something, but the surroundings are filled with the whirring sound of the air because of the high-speed collision friction issue, she did not hear anything.
"what are you saying?!"
That tens of seconds in the air, I feel like as long ten years.
In sight! Her outstretched left hand desperately forward, finally going to hold the girl stretched her hands, though not yet fully touch, but in that moment, she could almost feel the cold breath of the girl on a fingertip The feeling is so real clear.
"Open, parachute, immediately."
Yuki did not know where to hear these words, not that he clearly did not hear anything, it sounds as if out of thin air, like in the brain.
But she did not want, like this array sound so straight passed the brain in general.
She opened the back of his right hand subconsciously parachute, which in turn suddenly surprised a moment.
She has been impossible to save the girl, watching the girls last seen at a glance, is the girl's mouth to reveal a smile.
Very calm, no regrets, no fear, such as generous to meet with his own death in general.
Just kind of smile.
Yuki watched helplessly in front of the girl was so gone, falling straight toward the ground, and slowly turned into a small point, and finally disappeared.
"damn it!"
Her remorse to himself complained.
After the start of almost tear tearing shoulder tension, the body has the speed like a dandelion fall into a slowly sway in the breeze and under.
All end?
"It was time, ah, by the Miss discipline. If not promptly opened the parachute, so close to the height from the ground, even if there is no second parachute again and again, you will be smashed to pieces up."
Radio came the "angel" pilot with very glad greeting.
Yuki hearts are filled with complex emotions, I do not know Zuoheganxiang.
She closed her eyes, sighed with relief, leaving only a sigh.
"Fu Leiya ......"
俄文行不……
“—— бомбовый региона расстояние:”(距离投弹区域:)
“——пилот государства:”(飞行员状态:)
автоматической регулировки открыть ”(自动瞄准系统已开启)
“——подготовка бомбометания ”(准备投弹)
一阵冷风通过破碎的玻璃窗吹了进来,让飞行员的高空飞行服抖了一下,同时增益服上的亮光短暂亮起了。
通过头盔里面亮起的光,可以看见飞行头盔已经被破坏的面罩……和飞行员那没有任何器官在上面的骷髅脑袋。
没过多久,又弹出来了一个新的蓝色透明窗口。即使已经没有人看了,这台精密的毁灭机器却还不懈地运转着,渴望为它那已经不存在的主人带去胜利。
“—— представить свои проверки ”(提交友军验证)
“——режим автоматической обороны уже открыт ,Готовьтесь
столкнутся с врагом ”(自动攻防模式已开启,准备接敌)
info: Tupolev Tu-390‘Petrel’”(敌机信息:图波列夫Tu-390“海燕”)
not responding. Run the automatic attack program.”(飞行员未响应,自动攻击程序启动)
来自战斗机上的火力成功的命中了轰炸机机身中央的一座旋转炮塔,但是没能打掉另一座。同时,在机翼上的炮塔也完成了旋转,对着朝着轰炸机飞来的导弹开火了。
这是一场没有飞行员的空战,以轰炸机的胜利而告终。但是它的任务还没有结束:弹仓内四枚圆柱形的炸弹还没有投下。
“—— враг уже уничтожены ”(敌人已被消灭)
имеется ,Поврежденные корпуса ,необходимо
дополнить боеприпасов ”(损伤情况:第二炮塔报废,外壳受损,需要补充弹药)
боеприпасов :В14 типа ”(弹药种类:B14型)
“——боеприпасов лимит : 4 золотых ”(弹药限额:4枚)
“——Бомба уже готов ,целился ……”(炸弹准备就绪,正在瞄准……)
“——Цель завершения , готовы бомбометание ”(瞄准完成,准备投弹)